Rural enthusiasm contained by a short poem, a Trigee after insurance condemned my outhouse, comments?

Outhouse gone...........no place to go
I asked......................difficultly
For silence.................a grunting load
Withe scrawny breath.....I tried
To say Sh..................it stinks!
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I'm have a little trouble beside difficultly, on the other hand I'm laughing so hard it really doesn't thing! We didn't get indoor plumbing till I was ten so I can really relate to this next to interesting memories I thought I had banished!
I verbs it. Really cleverly done.
The first poem worked and combined pretty well, for some reason get got up on the second poem

---no place to go, difficulty-a grunting nouns. For some reason the difficultly part didnt work for me in that. Maybe its just me
Very funny....you elevated this up from 'okay' to 'good' by Sh.....it stinks. I love stuff like that.
'difficultly' does seem to be a bit awkward....(laboriously, strenuously?)
I'm have trouble with Lines 2 & 3 of S3. Re-read those two lines and you'll see what I mean.
enormously good!
I like it very much!! :)
The poem can be re-posted any time for sincere comments.

Lines 2& 3 in the 3rd stanza be key to the "descriptive form" of the piece.

Outhouses were other built with doors that swung inwards to ensure privacy.

People who cleaned outhouses were call "honey dippers".

Source(s): History of The Outhouse

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